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Hey noodle its you by sidviscous Hey noodle its you by sidviscous
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Critique by Andy666sanchez Jan 25, 2013, 8:05:10 AM
Clean up the lines. The color palette is very much like Jamie's. I say take it further and change it up. Avoid using black for shadows. Staging could be better.
Staging. Linework. Color. all need to be fix.
I rate originality a 2.5 for it being gorillaz and not your own. Technique is rather rushed in my opinion and not finished. really look at their bodies. those hands are awkward. Use reference for the hands and pose, even shoes. Murdoc's hand and arm is awkward. Sketch it out again and rework the final lines, I suggest traditionally. Good job. work harder! :)
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MarinaThePanda Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student General Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHA :D
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OldschoolCartoons Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Filmographer
chuck e cheese it better and cheap than Disneylad
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TaRtOoN-Man94 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
hmm, no sterotypes to be found here...
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sidviscous Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Filmographer
(its just payback because every time Muscleman is on tv noodle says "HEY MURDOC ITS YOUU")
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TaRtOoN-Man94 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
oh.
Pff HaHa :iconroflmaoplz:
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